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Posted 06-21-2009 at 01:13 AM by LunarEclipse
lifes mess people fight with others over the stupid things
a ranodm poem i wrote lol
The dispear,dishonest,disgrace, of the world
All alone nowhere to go
Nowhere to hide
Scared to be here
No one to fall back on
No one to love
Life's falling to pieces
Being shattered by simple words
People dieing for pointless things
Fighting for every breath
Strugging for the love and happyness in life
Witch will never happen
The failing,falt and blame will never end
What do you do
When your in a world of blame
Thats all your falt
a ranodm poem i wrote lol
The dispear,dishonest,disgrace, of the world
All alone nowhere to go
Nowhere to hide
Scared to be here
No one to fall back on
No one to love
Life's falling to pieces
Being shattered by simple words
People dieing for pointless things
Fighting for every breath
Strugging for the love and happyness in life
Witch will never happen
The failing,falt and blame will never end
What do you do
When your in a world of blame
Thats all your falt
Total Comments 6
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Nice poem. Not much into poems though, but still nice.
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If only I could hear the beat or music that goes to it.
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you have a never nice poem
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I don't think poems are suppose to have a beat or music that's what seperates it from a song i think.
That's why music is so much better ^_^ |
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Hint: fault
Nice free verse  |
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Very nice. It's very depressing, and you've managed to capture that pretty well.
And Phil, quiet you. |
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