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06-04-2008, 11:49 AM
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You have a good basic structure. Using a spell check and re-reading would go a long way to improving the review.
On another note, I disagree with you on the "presentation" aspect. I truly enjoy the still dialogue segments. I suppose it is a matter of personal prefference. Over all, WELL DONE! 
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